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Scene 6
Before the Performance
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(ZOOM out from the curtains to see the auditorium of the opera house slowly filling with people. Then CUT to backstage. The camera is at about a six-foot eye level and is moving about through the crowd backstage. We see props being moved, flats being put in place, costumes being put on, etc. We PAN to LEFT and see the BALLET GIRLS, in costume, practicing their steps with Mme. GIRY. Then, wander through crowds a bit more to see PIANGI, in costume, with M. REYER. The following dialogue is heard passed between them:)
REYER
Don Juan, Signor Piangi, here is the phrase:
(singing it correctly)
Those who tangle with Don Juan...
If you would, please...
PIANGI (singing it wrongly)
Those who tangle with Don Juan
REYER
No . . . no. Nearly, but NO! Again...
PIANGI (still wrong)
Those who tangle with Don Juan...
REYER (shakes his head)
"No, no. Those who *tan*, *tan*, *tan*..."
(We see and hear the edge of a black cape move furiously as we turn swiftly from them. We apparently are the PHANTOM. We are moving again further through the crowds. We suddenly see MARKSMEN gathered together with RAOUL. He is giving them instruction about where to be stationed. He says to one:)
RAOUL
Do what you have to do. Dont shoot unless you have to, but shoot to kill! .
(We suddenly hear the PHANTOMs laughter coming. RAOUL and the MARKSMEN hear it, but cannot tell where it has come from.)
MARKSMAN
What was that?!
RAOUL
Hes already in the building. Alright. Guard your posts, and man them well. This . . .thing is dangerous.
(The marksmen leave. We CLOSE IN on RAOUL, who looks up and shakes his fist as
though he had seen the Phantom and
knows he is present.)
Let the show begin...
(We turn away and FADE to scene 7 at a WIDESHOT of the closed curtains of the stage.)
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Scene
7
PERFORMANCE
OF DON JUAN TRIUMPHANT
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(The
AUDIENCE are taking their seats for the premiere of "Don Juan Triumphant."
MONTAGE to show that armed SOLDIERS and GENDARMES have taken over the building. Supervised
by RAOUL, ANDRE and FIRMIN, all exits from the opera house are barred and sealed as the
last of the audience filters into the auditorium. The AUDIENCE is locked in. SOLDIERS
guard all exits. BACKSTAGE, STAGEHANDS, SINGERS and DANCERS are preparing for the
impending performances, watched by the SOLDIERS. Meanwhile,
the orchestra has been tuning up. REYER takes his bow on his podium to polite applause. He
raises his baton. The OVERTURE begins. It is incredibly dissonant, a cacophony of sound;
the AUDIENCE has never heard anything like it before. People are horrified, consult their
programs, cough and whisper, fidget uncomfortably. SOMEONE
tries to leave but the doors are locked. REYER, pained by the music he is forced to
conduct, stuffs cotton plugs into his ears.
CHORUS
Here
the sire may serve the dam,
Here
the sacrificial lamb
CARLOTTA
AND CHORUS
Poor
young maiden! For the thrill
You
will have to pay the bill -
Serve
the meal and serve the maid!
(CUT
to: CHORUS, ET AL seen from right view, where arch is nearly seen.)
Don
Juan triumphs once again!
(CUT
to: PIANGI at CLOSE-UP)
DON
JUAN
Passarino,
faithful friend,
PASSARINO
Your
young guest believes I'm you -
DON
JUAN
When
you met you wore my cloak,
She
believes she dines with me,
Furtively,
we'll scoff and quaff,
When
it's late and modesty
PASSARINO
You
come home! I use your voice -
DON
JUAN
I
shall say: "come - hide with me!
PASSARINO
Poor
thing hasn't got a chance!
DON
JUAN
Here's
my hat, my cloak and sword.
(DON
JUAN puts on PASSARINO's cloak and goes into the curtained alcove where the bed awaits.
AMINTA
(CHRISTINE - offstage, entering)
".
. . no thoughts
No
dreams
PASSARINO
(onstage)
Master?
DON
JUAN (PHANTOM - behind the curtain)
Passarino
- go away!
(PASSARINO
leaves. CHRISTINE (AMINTA) enters. She takes off her cloak and sits down. Looks about her.
No- one. She starts on an apple. The PHANTOM, disguised as DON JUAN pretending to be
PASSARINO, emerges. He now wears PASSARINO's robe, the cowl of which hides his face. His
first words startle her.)
DON
JUAN (PHANTOM)
You
have come here
in
pursuit of
I have
brought you,
in
your mind
dropped
all defenses
now
you are here with me:
(CUT
to: WIDESHOT of the PHANTOM and CHRISTINE. DON
JUAN sits down beside AMINTA.)
Past
the point
our
games of
( [CUT
to WIDESHOT of STAGE from a BALCONY seat. CHRISTINE,
uncomfortable with the intentsity of DON JUANs words and the familiarity of his
voice, makes a smooth dance away to DOWNSTAGE LEFT. The PHANTOM follows.)
Past
all thought
abandon
thought,
(CUT
to: CLOSE-UP of the PHANTOM and CHRISTINE. The
PHANTOM places a hand on CHRISTINEs and moves down the length of her body, and then
almost touches her breasts before quickly turning away.)
What
raging fire
What
sweet seduction
Past
the point
what
warm,
Beyond
the point
(AMINTA,
downstage left, now sings alone.)
AMINTA
(CHRISTINE)
You
have brought me
to
that moment
I have
come here,
In my
mind,
(
[CLOSE-UP of CHRISTINE. She has a look of
terror on her face; she knows Don Juan is now being played by the PHANTOM. We continuously
CUT between CHRISTINE and the PHANTOM until the decided ...decided. Then we
cut to a CLOSE-UP of the PHANTOM, getting a few short CLOSE-UPs of his hands a couple of
times. CHRISTINE is singing off to the side and entwines her fingers together. The PHANTOM
is sitting on the bench turned away from the audience. He gradually turns around on the
bench to face frontwards to the audience. He slowly runs his hands down the length of his
body.*
[*
NOTE: There is actually much more to this scene and Michael Crawfords performance of
it that is too erotic for public reading.] )
and
now I am
(CUT
to: CLOSE-UP of PHANTOM. We move up and notice he
is breathing very heavily by his motions and movement of the cloak.)
(The
PHANTOM clutches his hands upward and his chest begins to heave.)
Past
the point
our
passion-play
Past
all thought
how
long should we
(The
PHANTOM once more runs his hands slowly back up his body, CHRISTINE comes up behind him
and grasped his fingers. He runs her hands over his head and down his body, then quickly
turns to face her still grasping her hands.)
When
will the blood
When
will the flames
(The
PHANTOM and CHRISTINE are face to face. It is
apparent to almost everyone now that PIANGI is dead and the PHANTOM has taken his place on
stage.)
BOTH
Past
the point
the
bridge
We've
passed the point
(CHRISTINE
removes the PHANTOMs hood.)
PHANTOM
Say
you'll share with
Lead
me, save me
(He
takes from his finger a ring and holds it out to her. Slowly she takes it and puts it on
her finger.)
Say
you want me
Anywhere
you go
(We
never reach the word 'you', for CHRISTINE quite
ANDRE
Oh, my
God
my God
(CARLOTTA
runs on with her little dogs.)
CARLOTTA
What
is it? What has happened? Ubaldo!
(Rushing
over to PIANGI's body)
Oh my
darling, my darling
Who has
(We
notice the two little dogs sniffing PIANGI's corpse. FIRMIN kicks one of them out of the
way.)
CARLOTTA
(Hysterical, attacking ANDRE)
You!
Why did you let this happen?
MME
GIRY (to RAOUL)
Monsieur
le Vicomte! Come with me!
RAOUL
But
can I trust you?
MME
GIRY
But
remember:
(MEG
demonstrates:)
MEG
Like
this, monsieur - I'll come with you.
MME
GIRY
No,
Meg! No, you stay here!
(To
RAOUL)
Come
with me, monsieur, do as I say.
(They
rush off. MEG stares after them. She rushes off too.)
(CUT
to next scene)