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Scene
8
CHRISTINES
DRESSING ROOM
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(MUSIC
INSERT: a little bit of the background music from when Christine wakes up ... I
remember there was mist...
(MEG
is looking for CHRISTINE. The building is deserted, shadows everywhere. MEG is a tiny
figure in the darkness, vulnerable and frightened.)
(CUT
to CLOSE-UP of MEG seen from her waist up.)
MEG
Christine..
(CUT
to CLOSE-UP of MEG seen from her waist up, back to camera as she slowly opens door.)
(MEG
steps into the dressing room. [CUT to WIDESHOT of inside of dressing room]
The
gaslight has been turned down low. She moves towards the dressing table covered in
flowers. Next to it, we see her reflection in the full-length mirror. Suddenly, the
gaslight goes out. [CLOSE-UP of MEG looking from her right shoulder, eyes looking to left,
then CUT to CLOSE-UP of MEG facing the camera.]
The
room is plunged into darkness. Startled, she turns to the mirror and glimpses a shadow
behind her reflection.
[CUT to mirror, where camera move slowly to left as MEGS hand reaches up. She steps to one side and suddenly the panel next to the mirror swivels silently and gathers her through to the other side. (ie. We see the mechanics of what seemed at first magic.)
(CUT
to other side of mirror) MEG has found CHRISTINE's route to the PHANTOM's world.
MEG
comes into shot and sees the dressing room on the other side of the mirror.
[From
MEGS POV probably by handheld camera] She turns and is immediately confronted by a
moving AUTOMAT. Courageously, she walks down the corridor with the moving AUTOMATS.
[Again
from MEGS POV by handheld camera] Shadows seem to follow. It is dark, damp and
dangerous. A rat scampers through.
[CUT
to side view of MEG] A shadow appears directly behind MEG. A hand reaches out and grabs
her shoulder. MEG turns in terror. It is her mother, MME. GIRY.)
(CUT
to Scene 9- BACKSTAGE)
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Scene
9
BACKSTAGE
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(BUQUET
[with back to camera] mysteriously appears.
[CUT
to front of BUQUET and BALLET GIRLS], a length of fabric serving as a cloak, and a piece
of rope as the Punjab lasso. He is showing off to the BALLET GIRLS.)
BUQUET
Like
yellow parchment
a
great black hole is half the
(Demonstrating
his method of self-defense against the Punjab lasso, he inserts his hand between his neck
and the noose, and then pulls the rope taut. With a mixture of horror and delight, the
BALLET GIRLS applaud this demonstration.)
You
must be always
(Behind
BUQUET, MME. GIRY comes into shot [at right of screen] with MEG.)
GIRY
Those
who speak
(CUT
to BUQUET and MME. GIRY in same frame.)
Joseph
Buquet,
([CUT
to MEG] MEG is at the window of the dormitory.
[CUT
to window where the opera roof is seen] It overlooks a section of the opera roof. MEG
screams as she sees the specter of the PHANTOM leading CHRISTINE across the roof.)
(move
camera to CLOSE-UP of MEG)
MEG
Hes
here- the Phantom of the Opera...
(CUT
to WIDESHOT of BALLET GIRLS, BUQUET, MME. GIRY, and MEG.)
(The
other ballet girls scream. MME. GIRY claps her hands to order the girls to bed.)
MME
GIRY
Au
lit! Au lit!
(MME.
GIRY walks out.)
([CUT
to WIDESHOT of MME. GIRY in corridor] In another part of the corridor, MME. GIRY looks up
and [CUT to CHRISTINE seen above from MME. GIRYS POV] sees at the top of a
staircase, CHRISTINE, backlit by the moon.
CHRISTINE
walks down towards her and [CUT to WIDESHOT of CHRISTINE walking to MME. GIRY seen from
top of staircase] almost faints into MME. GIRY's arms as she reaches her. MME. GIRY leads
her away.
[move
closer to BUQUET] BUQUET has been watching them. And unknown to BUQUET, [move camera to
above] from a skylight above, the PHANTOM has been watching him.) [fade to black)
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Scene
10
THE
MANAGERS' OFFICE
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(CUT
to WIDESHOT view of a corner of the Paris Opera House, then fade to the doors of the
Managers office, then fade to inside of office where FIRMIN is at his desk. Desk, chairs, papers. FIRMIN is scornfully eyeing a
newspaper article.)
(CUT
to CLOSE-UP of FIRMIN)
FIRMIN
"Mystery
(CUT
to WIDESHOT of FIRMIN)
(He
lowers the paper.)
Bad
news on
Still,
at least
Diva
tenders
Half
your cast disappears,
To
hell with Gluck and Handel -
(CUT
to ANDRE)
(ANDRE
bursts in, in a temper.)
ANDRE
Damnable!
FIRMIN
Andre,
please don't shout . . .
ANDRE
But we
have no cast . . .
FIRMIN
(calmly)
But
Andre,
(He
has been sorting mail on his desk. Finding the two letters from the PHANTOM.)
Oh, it
seems
(He
hands the letter to ANDRE, who opens it and reads [NOTE: if we see the writing in the
notes, the writing should be clumsy and in red ink, according to the book.)
ANDRE
"Dear
Andre
We
were hardly bereft
Otherwise
(CUT
to FIRMIN)
FIRMIN
(reading his)
"Dear
Firmin,
Send
it care of the ghost,
No-one
likes a debtor,
(CUT
to FIRMIN and ANDRE)
FIRMIN
Who
would have the gall
ANDRE
Someone
with a puerile brain!
FIRMIN
(examining both letters)
These
are both signed "O.G." . . .
ANDRE
Who
the hell is he?
BOTH
(immediately realizing)
Opera
ghost!
(CUT
to FIRMIN)
FIRMIN
(not amused)
It's
really not amusing!
(CUT
to ANDRE)
ANDRE
He's
abusing our position!
(CUT
to FIRMIN)
FIRMIN
In
addition he wants money!
(CUT
to ANDRE)
ANDRE
He's a
funny sort of spectre . . .
(CUT
to FIRMIN and ANDRE with doors behind them.)
BOTH
. . .
to expect a
Nothing
plainer -
([WIDESHOT]
They are interrupted by the arrival of RAOUL, who brandishes another of the PHANTOM'S
notes and walks towards to the managers.)
RAOUL
Where
is she?
ANDRE
You
mean Carlotta?
RAOUL
I mean
Miss Daae -
FIRMIN
Well,
how should we know?
RAOUL
I want
an answer -
FIRMIN
What's
all this nonsense?
ANDRE
Of
course not!
FIRMIN
Don't
look at us!
RAOUL
She's
not with you, then?
FIRMIN
Of
course not!
ANDRE
We're
in the dark . . .
RAOUL
Monsieur,
don't argue -
FIRMIN
And
what is it, that we're
(Realizing
his mistake)
Written
!
(RAOUL
hands the note to ANDRE, who reads it.)
ANDRE
"Do
not fear for Miss Daae.
(The
MANAGERS look mystified.)
RAOUL
If you
didn't write it, who did?
(CUT
to: CARLOTTA and PIANGI coming in. CARLOTTA,
too has a letter, which has cheered her no more than the others.)
CARLOTTA
Where
is he?
ANDRE
Ah,
welcome back!
(move
camera from right to left when CARLOTTA and PIANGI approach ANDRE.)
CARLOTTA
Your
precious patron -
CARLOTTA/PIANGI
Where
is he?
(CUT
to: RAOUL with CARLOTTAS back to the camera at right of screen.)
RAOUL
What
is it now?
(CUT
to: CLOSE-UP of CARLOTTA with RAOULs back to left of screen.)
CARLOTTA
(to RAOUL)
I have
your letter -
(FIRMIN
comes into shot.)
FIRMIN
(to RAOUL)
And
did you send it?
RAOUL
Of
course not!
(ANDRE
comes into shot.)
ANDRE
As if
he would!
CARLOTTA
You
didn't send it?
RAOUL
Of
course not!
FIRMIN
What's
going on . . .?
CARLOTTA
(to RAOUL)
You
dare to tell me,
RAOUL
And
what is it that I'm
(RAOUL
takes the letter and reads it.
"Your
days
(CUT
to: MANAGERS. The MANAGERS are beginning to tire of the intrigue.)
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Far
too many
GIRY
Miss
Daae has returned.
(CUT
to: FIRMIN, ANDRE)
FIRMIN
(dryly)
In
which case, I think our meeting is adjourned!
ANDRE
Where
precisely is she now?
(CUT
to: side view of MME. GIRY and MEG walking towards the MANAGERS.)
GIRY
I
thought it best
MEG
She
needed rest.
(RAOUL
comes into shot, walking towards MME. GIRY and MEG.)
RAOUL
May I
see her?
GIRY
No,
monsieur, she will see no-one.
(CARLOTTA
and PIANGI come into shot.)
CARLOTTA/PIANGI
Will
she sing?
(MME.
GIRY and MEG)
GIRY
Here,
I have a note . . .
(RAOUL,
CARLOTTA, ANDRE, and PIANGI come into shot as they try to get the note.)
RAOUL/CARLOTTA/ANDRE/PIANGI
Let me
see it!
(Move
camera to FIRMIN when he snatches the letter.)
FIRMIN
(snatching it)
Please!
FIRMIN
(Opens the letter and reads. The PHANTOM'S voice gradually lakes over.)
"Gentlemen,
I have now sent you several notes of the most amiable nature, detailing how my theatre is
to be run.
(CUT
to: ANDRE, RAOUL, ETC., then CUT back to: FIRMIN, then when the PHANTOMS VOICE
gradually comes in, FADE to the PHANTOMS model of the Opera Populaire.)
You
have not followed my instructions. I shall
give you one last chance . . ."
(The
PHANTOM'S model of the Opera Populaire. We see in particular the stage of the opera house
with the set for "Il Muto". Figurines, exact reproductions of the cast, CARLOTTA
and CHRISTINE included, populate the stage. The PHANTOM'S hand, in a white glove, comes
into shot. It removes the head from CHRISTINE figurine and swaps it with that of
CARLOTTA's.)
PHANTOM'S VOICE (taking over)
Christine
Daae has returned to you,
(We
also see Box Five within the model:)
I
shall watch the performance from my normal seat in Box Five, which will be kept empty for
me. Should these commands be ignored, a disaster beyond your imagination will occur.
(The
PHANTOM's hand taps the miniature chandelier of the model opera house, as the real
chandelier tinkles as if disturbed by a gust of wind.)
(FADE
to: WIDESHOT of FIRMIN, then pull back to see ANDRE and EVERYONES backs to the
camera.)
FIRMIN
(taking over)
"I
remain, Gentlemen,
(CUT
to: ANDRE, MEG and CARLOTTA)
MEG
Christine,
Christine....
CARLOTTA
Christine!
ANDRE
Whatever
next . . .?
CARLOTTA
It's
all a ploy to help Christine!
(CUT
to: FIRMIN and ANDRE)
FIRMIN
This
is insane . . .
(CUT
to: CARLOTTA, MEG, ANDRE, and FIRMIN)
CARLOTTA
I know
who sent this:
(move
camera from CARLOTTA to RAOUL when she points to him) (pointing an accusing finger.)
The
Vicomte - her lover!
RAOUL
(ironical)
Indeed?
(to
the OTHERS)
Can
you believe this?
(CUT
to: MANAGERS and CARLOTTA. ANDRE and FIRMIN
walk towards CARLOTTA and PIANGI)
ANDRE
(to CARLOTTA, in protest)
Signora!
PIANGI
How
can you do this?
CARLOTTA
(half to the MANAGERS, half to herself.)
I am
unwanted!
FIRMIN
(to CARLOTTA)
This
is a joke!
ANDRE
This
changes nothing!
CARLOTTA
I am
unwelcomed!
(CUT
to: FIRMIN and ANDRE seen over CARLOTTAS shoulder.)
FIRMIN
Signora!
ANDRE
You
are our star!
FIRMIN
And
always will be!
ANDRE
Signora
. . .
FIRMIN
The
man is mad!
ANDRE
We
don't take orders!
(CUT
to: FIRMIN and ANDRE facing EVERYONE.)
FIRMIN
(announcing it to EVERYONE.)
Miss
Daae will be playing
the
Pageboy - the silent role . . .
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Carlotta
will be playing
(PIANGI
comes into shot.)
PIANGI
You
don't deserve her!
(CARLOTTA
comes into shot.)
CARLOTTA
(waxing melodramatic)
It's
useless trying to
You
thus insult the honor
(CUT
to GIRY, CARLOTTA, and MANAGERS. During this,
RAOUL comes into shot, then MEG.)
GIRY
Who
scorn his word,
CARLOTTA
(to MANAGERS)
You
have reviled me!
GIRY
The
angel sees,
RAOUL
Why
did Christine
CARLOTTA
You
have rebuked me!
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Signora,
pardon us . . .
CARLOTTA
You
have replaced me!
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Please,
Signora,
GIRY
This
hour shall see
MEG/RAOUL
I must
see her . . .
CARLOTTA
This
is uncalled for!
GIRY
The
angel knows,
RAOUL
Where
did she go . . .?
CARLOTTA
You
are unthinking!
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Signora,
sing for us!
(CUT
to: WIDESHOT of EVERYONE)
RAOUL/GIRY/MEG
What
new surprises
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Our
star . . .!
CARLOTTA/PIANGI
You go
too far!
(On
this note, the prelude to Prima Donna begins, and we CUT to busy backstage
area of the Opera, we close in on FIRMIN and ANDRE as they bow down to CARLOTTA.)
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Scene
11
CARLOTTAS
DRESSING ROOM
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(Backstage,
Carlotta is preparing for the evening performance of "Il Muto." She is
surrounded by her SEAMSTRESS, WIGMAKER, MAID and PIANGI. Through the following, she is
strapped onto her corset, bosoms heaving, perfume, powder, wigs and beauty spots are
applied, the dress is lowered down on her by pulleys from the ceiling. Most importantly,
she is constantly spraying her throat from a crystal bottle. Meanwhile, ANDRE and FIRMIN
fawn magnificently; they have brought her bonbons, oysters, huge flowers, another nasty
little dog. PIANGI groans as she hands it to him. They drink champagne from her slipper,
Firmin swallowing his disgust, and grovel like pros.)
(The
MANAGERS adopt their most persuasive attitudes. CUT
to: MANAGERS)
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Prima
donna
ANDRE
Can
you bow out
FIRMIN
Think
of how they all
(CUT
to: CARLOTTA seen from below with the MANAGERS backs to the camera below screen.)
BOTH
Prima
donna,
ANDRE
Think
of your muse . . .
FIRMIN
And of
the queues
(CUT
to: MANAGERS seen from above with CARLOTTAs back to the camera.)
BOTH
Can
you deny us the triumph
(CUT
to: CARLOTTA seen from below with the MANAGERS backs to the camera below screen.
(CUT
between left and right side views, CLOSE-UPS, WIDESHOTS of CARLOTTA as she walks about her
dressing room in an overdramatic fashion.)
CARLOTTA
(to herself, in triumph)
Prima
donna
Think
of their cry
Think
how you'll shine
(As
CARLOTTA walks about vainly, the MANAGERS look on.)
ANDRE/FIRMIN
Who'd
believe a diva happy to relieve a chorus girl,
Raoul
and the soubrette,
Although
he may demur,
You'd
never get away
it's
just the sort of story
Prima
donna
(CUT
to: WIDESHOT of MANAGERS and CARLOTTA)
ALL
Light
up the stage
(We
pull pack to see CARLOTTA, FIRMIN, and ANDRE from above A CLOSE-UP of the PHANTOMs
face appears [overlapping] over the figures of CARLOTTA, FIRMIN and ANDRE. They do not hear it, and CARLOTTA is standing,
ready to go out. The PHANTOM fades as the
shot changes to the next.)
PHANTOM'S
VOICE
So, it
is to be war between us! If these demands are not met, a disaster beyond your imagination
will occur!
ALL
Once
more!
(CUT
to BACKSHOT of Carlotta, exiting her room through doors held open by FIRMIN and
ANDRE.)
(As
they exit, we close in on the doors closing and they suddenly become [FADE TECHNIQUE]
curtains pulling back to reveal FIRMIN and ANDRE entering their box in WIDESHOT from
BACK.)